“Leave me,” Jaka coughed, blood bubbling from his lips.
A rookie officer on a elite tactical team must fight his way through 15 floors of a fortified slum tower after his squad is betrayed and trapped inside.
Inside, a small, thin man in a white shirt sat at a table, eating rice. He didn’t look up. “You killed forty-seven of my men to eat dinner with me. You must be hungry.”
There was no time to process. The door splintered. A hail of gunfire forced Rama to roll through a window onto a narrow external walkway, fifteen stories above the Jakarta slums. Rain soaked him as he ran, leaping from one balcony to the next, bullets chewing the concrete at his heels. The.Raid.Redemption.2011.1080p.10bit.BluRay.HIN...
Gunfire erupted in the hallway. Andi pushed Rama toward a service door. “Go!”
For one second, nothing happened.
He fired once. Tama’s head snapped back. The rice bowl shattered. “Leave me,” Jaka coughed, blood bubbling from his lips
Sergeant Jaka, a mountain of a man with a shaved head and tired eyes, held up a fist. Everyone froze.
“Shoot me,” Tama said, chewing slowly, “and the recording dies. My men in the police force release the tapes. Every dirty cop, every politician I own—they’ll burn this city down looking for you. Put the gun down, and I’ll let you walk out.”
He crashed through a window on Floor 14. A man sat alone in a chair, cleaning a pistol. He looked up. Same eyes. Same jaw. He didn’t look up
Rama ran. He didn’t look back. He heard the fight behind him—shouts, screams, a single shot that sounded too final.
And somewhere in a morgue, beside a body with his brother’s face, a single fingerprint would lead investigators back to the truth. But that’s another story.
From the dead man’s pocket, a small voice recorder fell out, still running. Rama crushed it under his heel.
Rama raised the pistol. His hand shook.
Since you asked me to I’ll assume you want a short narrative inspired by that film’s intense, claustrophobic action. Here’s a story built from the premise of The Raid: Redemption . Title: The 15th Floor